1. Intrigue 2. Opportunity 3. Concern
Chantal
1. the colors used and brush strokes in the water draw your eye
2. Maybe add a bit more color to the boats like in your test page
3. The strip is a little less precise, the brush strokes in the boats and houses are a bit looser in the strip
Jasmine
1.Your ability to blend the colors in the water and sky is phenomenal. I love how the style is abstract yet I know exactly what I am looking at
2. I think you have the opportunity to use even more brush strokes because I think the strokes in different directions really portray the style
3. The houses are lightweight floating which is really cool but not as realistic. Not sure if there's anything you can do about that but otherwise your painting is amazing and I wouldn't change much!
Ellie
1. Interesting color scheme, I love the little houses in the background.
2. Water looks beautiful and the shadows and highlights of the boats are really well done. I would create more of a middle ground between the water and the trees.
3. I would also experiment with more wild brush strokes, the ones in your painting are much smoother compared to the original. I suggest that you incorporate the boats more into the middle ground, it seems as though they are touching the forest banks, create a better sense of depth. Overall really great! 
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